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Sara’s Grandpa is the leading role in the story. He is fond of playing golf even at the age of seventy. He cant talk very well but his love for golf has never ended. Sara’s Grandpa is preparing for the finals. Sara believes that her Grandpa cant win the game because of his old age. But her Grandpa wants to prove Sara his strength and love for golf. In this way they both have a bet with each other. This story relates to my Grandpa’s love for cricket, although he is sixty four years old. He cant play very well but never misses a single match between England and Australia. At the end in fact the Grand father wins the game as well as the bet., more
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